Talk:Kitten/@comment-24947466-20150729161352

To Rorykurago: I was going to message you on the 27th shortly after I sent my message about "Kitten"--that awkward moment when you realize a POV switch hasn't introduced a character's name and you have to refer to them as something else while the audience knows; i figured out how to fix it, though--and then I forgot >_< Just as well, as I really didn't like the rewriting and it occurred to me today that just because the triplets couldn't talk, /Xiong could so she introduces everyone and so "Kitten" is perfect again! ^u^